Thursday, September 26, 2013

Post #2: First Draft Revision Analysis

1. In this paper, I am claiming that Big Guy sewed his friend's name into his hand either because he wants to prove he is a man who can make feminine activities manly, he is in love with his friend, or he is still in pain from his mother's death.

2. My pieces of evidence are that Big Guy combined sewing, a traditionally female activity, with pain, which represents manliness; he proved that he will withstand all means of torture to impress his friend's name upon him; and that was such a crazy act that it suggests Big Guy has gone over the edge, that his mother's death had an impact so great on him that he has gone crazy.

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