Strategies for Revising:
-I read through my paper to see if every sentence makes sense.
-I looked at other people's comments to see if I want to change my writing, and how I want to change it.
Particular Strategies:
-I read through the essay for clarity.
-I made sure the arguments of the supporting paragraphs are reflected in my thesis.
Changes in My Paper:
-The thesis is getting stronger and more detailed.
-The topic sentences have become more argumentative.
-The vocabulary is getting more sophisticated, with more formal an less conversational language.
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